The Charge Fragment:
Why It Was Yeats Who Wrote It
by Cynthia Joyce Clay
Remembering
that the first villanelle in English was written in 1874, there
are four prime candidates who may have written the Charge in the
form of a villanelle. These are William Earnest Henley, Aleister
Crowley, William Butler Yeats, and Dorren Valiente; all of whom
were Pagans and wrote Pagan poetry. Valiente is well known for
having written an extremely beautiful prose version of the Charge
of the Goddess as well as a poem version (Farrar 1981/1984, p.
15). However, Valientes poem version is not a villanelle.
Between her being a later author than the others and having her
own non-villanelle poem version, it seems unlikely she is the
author of the Villanelle Charge.
William Henley wrote a few villanelles (Henley, 1908/1970, pp.
227-230) and In journals which he [Henley] edited, much of
the early work of W. B. Yeats...was published (Conell, p.
2). Henley, like Yeats, was unabashed in his paganism
(Connel, p. 42). In one of his villanelles (Henley, p. 228)
Henley clearly refers to magical practices: And if you wish
to flute a spell,/Or ask a meeting neath the lime.
Nevertheless in that very villanelle ...Henley, provides an
excellent example of the condescending attitude toward the
form... (McFarland, p. 50) and goes on to say You
must not ask of it the swell/Of organs grandiose and
sublime-- (Henley, p. 228). Since the Charge of the Goddess
is one of the most important moments in rituals for many Pagans
or Witches, this could be taken as a statement that a villanelle
is not an appropriate form for so meaningful a part of worship.
If this is what Henley means, it could either be a cover for
writing the "Villanelle Charge", or his true feelings.
On the theory that the statement could be a ruse I read several
of Henleys poems and as many of his villanelles as I could.
Other than the villanelle which is partly quoted here and begins
with A dainty Things the Villanelle (Henley, p.
228) which is mildy amusing, his poetry is just awful. Henley
just hammers away at the rhyme scheme. Nor am I alone in my
dislike of his poetry: Edmund Gosse, Andrew Lang, William
Henley, John Payne--these names are nearly absent from
anthologies now, and not altogether unjustifyably says
McFarland (p. 61).
Henleys
poetry in no way matches the craftsmanship of the
"Villanelle Charge." What is very significant about
Henleys villanelle and its clear allusion to magic is that
it was first published in 1888 (McFarland, personal
communication, Sept. 2000). This compounded with the fact that
Henley served as editor to Yeatss early poetry allows for
the speculation that Yeats showed Henley his (Yeatss)
villanelle. Since Henley was a Pagan, it is not impossible that
he was a member of the Golden Dawn. Henleys A dainty
Things the Villanelle establishes two points: one
Henleys poetry is inferior to the "Villanelle
Charge" and so Henley was not its author; second and more
importantly, that the Charge in villanelle form must have been
written in 1888 or just before since Henley in A dainty
Things a villanelle admonishes against the use
villanelles for anything of importance. Why Henley would admonish
against using the villanelle form for organs grandiose and
sublime if someone had mentioned doing or had actually done
just that?
Before moving on to Yeats, Aleister Crowley must be considered
because he did write Pagan poetry and especially because lines
from Crowleys Book of the Law --I,
58 (Crowley, p. 201) appear in the "Villanelle Charge."
Taking a look at some of Crowleys poetry such as But
of all the plagues wherewith a man is cursed, /Take my word for
it, Woman is the worst misogyny is clearly expressed which
is quite at odds with the view of the feminine expressed in the
"Villanelle Charge." As regarding the quality of
Crowleys poetry, The best that could ever be said of
Crowleys fictional prose style was that it was an
improvement upon his verse (his non-fiction writing was better
than either of them, without ever threatening excellence)
(Hutchinson, 1998, p. 81). According to Kathleen Raine (1990, p.
216) Crowley wrote many volumes of bad verse and resented
Yeats poor opinion of it. Raine (p. 181) also asserts
that Yeats was the leader of the successful ejection of
Crowley from the Golden Dawn. Indeed, Hutchinson (1998, p.
72) provides excerpts of Yeatss letters wherein Yeats says
We did not admit him [Crowley] because we did not think
that a mystical society was intended to be a reformatory.
Crowley, failing to be initiated by the London branch of the
Golden Dawn, went to Paris where Mathers initiated him in
November of 1898 (Hutchinson, p. 69). Therefore Crowley was
initiated into the Golden Dawn eight years after Yeats was.
Although Crowley claimed to have received the Book
of the Law during a private ceremony in
1904, the Book of the Law was
not published until 1938 (Wilkinson & Beta, 1996, p. 10) and
did not contain the commentaries. The Book
of the Law was privately circulated among
Crowleys's devotees before 1938, but Yeats was no devotee of
Crowley. Since Yeats died in January of 1938 (Jeffares, 1984, p.
xx) it is highly improbable that Yeats ever read the Book
of the Law. If Yeats wrote the
"Villanelle Charge," he could not have taken any part
of it from Crowley.
Since Crowley published secrets of the Golden Dawn in 1909
(Hutchinson, p. 119) for which Mathers sued him in 1910
(Hutchinson, p. 119) it is more likely that Crowley had stolen
the lines that appear in the "Villanelle Charge" from
the Golden Dawn. Since Yeats considered Crowley a mad
person (Hutchinson, p. 71) and a person of
unspeakable life (Hutchinson, p. 73) and may have booted
Crowley down the stairs when Crowley came to take the Golden Dawn
papers held by the London group (Hutchinson, pp. 71-72) it is
unlikely Yeats would have shown Crowley the "Villanelle
Charge." It seems more likely that those particular lines
that appear as I,58 of the Book of the Law
were part of body of secrets held by the Golden Dawn, Yeats and
Crowley each using them according to their respective talents and
ethics.
Having ruled out Doreen Valiente as being a later writer not
known for writing villanelles; having ruled out William Henley as
a writer of poor villanelles and as a poet who regards the
villanelle as a form not deserving of organs grandiose and
sublime; and having ruled out Aleister Crowley as a
misogynist thief, I can now elaborate upon why I believe William
Butler Yeats wrote the villanelle fragment that I was given (USA
mail service, not astrally) as the Charge of the Goddess. First,
to be considered is that Yeats was writing poetry at the time
that Passerats villanelle form suddenly became used by
poets writing in English. Since I have no artifact that can be
dated and handwriting analyzed, proof must take the form of an
analysis of the fragment's coherence with Yeatss known
choices of subjects, themes, and techniques.
First, is the subject matter of the "Villanelle Charge"
subject matter Yeats would be interested in? Hutton (p. 80) avers
that the Golden Dawn had a powerful image of a female
divinity built into its ideological core... Hutton (p. 80)
goes on to say that the deities the Golden Dawn studied were
invoked to assist the spiritual progress or practical
wishes of a person or group... Further Kathleen Raine
(1990, p. 212) offers evidence to support her supposition that
Yeats took part in the writing of Golden Dawn rituals. The Golden
Dawn included a ritual about the moon (Raine, p. 210). Further,
Raine (p. 218) also quotes from Yeatss
Autobiographies to establish that Yeats had
himself invoked the moon. During 1897-1902 Yeats formed his own
mystical group for whom he created rituals (Hutton, p. 157).
Also, Yeats was particularly interested in Irish history. He
wrote a collection of Irish fairy and folk tales (Yeats, 1888)
and he wrote a highly complimentary introduction to Lady
Gregorys compilation of ancient Irish sagas (Yeats and Lady
Gregory, 1902/1986). The Irish sagas talk of the ancient Irish
Bards. Further, it is not unreasonable to assume that Yeats would
have read Reginal Scots Discovery of
Witchcraft which calls the ancient Bards
witches (Robbinson, p. 134). As a member of secret society that
celebrated a Goddess as well as a God, as a possible writer of
mystical rituals, as someone who had himself invoked the moon,
and as someone who may have known that his predecessors, the
Bards of ancient Ireland were sometimes called witches, Yeats
would be inclined to use the subject matter of the
"Villanelle Charge."
The next question is are the themes of the "Villanelle
Charge" congruent with themes important to Yeats. The first
theme presented in the "Villanelle Charge" is that of
meeting secretly to do a magical rite. This is exactly something
Yeats was in the habit of doing. The next theme is the adoration
of a female divinity. This too would be a theme that Yeats would
be comfortable with especially as he is quoted by Hutton (p. 165)
as saying women come easily than men to that wisdom which
ancient peoples, and all wild peoples even now, consider the only
wisdom. The next theme is that of earth being a place of
joy with love being a constant ritual to the Goddess. One of the
most persistent themes of Yeats poetry is that of
transcendent knowledge inherent in just loving. The final theme
of the "Villanelle Charge" is reincarnation expressed
as a circle. According to A. G. Stock, (1964, p. 123) in
Yeatss symbolism the moon governs human life and the
nights of a lunar month stand for the successive
incarnations. A Vision
amounts to a summing-up of Yeats [sic] own sense of values
in a system of thought about the soul in and beyond life...
(Stock, p. 122) and in A Vision (Yeats,
1937/1938) the workings of incarnations are referred to
repeatedly as The Great Wheel (Yeats, p. 67) spheres
(Yeats, p. 187), and cycles (p. 243). Further Yeats (p. 67) opens
"Book I: The Great Wheel" of A
Vision with quotations from Empedocles,
Burnet , and Heraclitus to define God as circle revolving from
discord to concord and back again for all time. Yeatss
symbolism of the moon and his understanding of the deity are
themes that are central in the "Villanelle Charge."
When delving into Yeats to find the most salient characteristics
of his poetry, I discovered that Yeats revised his works
throughout his life time (Rosenthal, 1962, p. xix); indeed
for Yeatss poems a truly Definitive
Edition ...will always remain elusive
(Finneran, 1983/1990, p. 1). Therefore, though I date the initial
writing of the "Villanelle Charge" as 1888 because of
the admonishment in Henleys villanelle, in all probability
Yeats would have revised it over the years. If Henleys poem
is not a comment on the "Villanelle Charge," then Yeats
could have first composed the "Villanelle Charge" in
1899 taking the moon ritual given in Leland's The
Gospel of Aradia which came out in 1899 as
its base. This eleven years' difference between the publication
of Henleys villanelle and Lelands Aradia
moon ritual is highly significant. Dating the "Villanelle
Charge" with Lelands 1899 book is reasonable, and yet
why would Henley in 1888 counsel against using villanelles for
organs grandiose? The Henley date is tantalizing
because it suggests that Yeats had access to a version of the
Charge prior to the earliest historically accepted date of
Lelands Gospel of Aradia.
The Henley date hints the "Villanelle Charge" was
written prior to the publication of Aradia;
nevertheless, historians prefer a documentable date. If a clear
written source is available it is accepted over a suggestive
comment. The Leland date provides such a source, but only in
part. The passage of the "Villanelle Charge" that is
almost word for word as given by Crowley in his The
Book of the Law was not published until
just before Yeats died (Jeffares, p. xx; Wilkinson and Beta,
1996, p. 10). Since both men belonged to the Golden Dawn and both
had received instruction from Mathers who was one of the four to
form the Golden Dawn; and since Mathers was a Freemason, the
conjectures I raised earlier of ancient Bardic influences on the
Freemasons and possible (though only remotely possible) Italian
sorcery influences coming by way of France through Mary Queen of
Scotss retinue seem reasonable. Both the themes and the
subject of the "Villanelle Charge" are related to the
Italian witchcraft as related by Leland as well as being related
to perceptions of the ancient Celtic Bardic traditions.
The third question in analyzing "Villanelle Charge" for
attributing authorship to Yeats is: is the craftsmanship of the
"Villanelle Charge" akin to Yeatss craftsmanship.
Although it was easy to find information about Yeatss habit
of revising; indeed one whole book I found was simply on that
(Finnerman, 1983/1990), it was very difficult for me to find
critical commentary on Yeatss technique. Most critical
writings I found centered on his symbolism. A scouring of WEB
yielded all of Yeatss poetry, but no commentary on his
technique. However, like Dorothy of the Wizard of Oz, I found
what I need on my very own bookshelf. I mention this difficulty
because I am always uneasy finding only one source that answers a
particular question. I am not an authority on Yeats; I am not an
authority on Yeats authorities. Unlike the other information I
have given in this article which can be validated by more than
one source even if I only give one source, the information on
Yeatss technique is based on one source. Nevertheless, I
have studied poetry formally (one teacher being Allan Grossman
who received a Genius--MacArthur Award) and since the
observations of the source struck me as wholly in keeping with my
own analysis of Yeatss technique, I shall quote away with
confidence.
Yeats turned to folk sources to give his work the grain of
ordinary humanity and the direct appeal of ballads and other
popular traditional forms (Rosenthal, 1961, p. xvii). Yeats
is known to have based some of poems on Irish folk songs and
ballads (Finnerman, pp. 185-194). The element of song is
always present in this poets work, not only in his purely
lyrical writing with obvious roots in folksong but also in his
more intellectual and rhetorical writing (Rosenthal, pp.
xvii-xviii). Yeats usually employs a conventional stanza...
and his syntax is as straightforward as that of good prose.
(Rosenthal p. xviii) Yeats can make a slight distortion or
variation--an off-rhyme or grammatical ambiguity--count for a
great deal. (Rosenthal p. xviii) One of the hallmarks of
Yeatss later poetry is that The tone is prophetic and
incantatory, yet in some fashion these qualities are combined
with candor, directness, and something like the flavor of
conversational speech. There is far more to the later Yeats, but
it was all promised in the poetry before 1900... (Rosenthal
p. xviii) Yeats expressed worship of erotic love and
beauty (Rosenthal, p. xxxii); and Yeats held the
"conviction of a sexual principle at the heart of all
existance. Yeats was committed to mystisicm and
believed that the power of his later writing owed to his
commitment as he codified it in a A Vision.
(Rosenthal, p. xxxii)
To better related these hallmarks of Yeats's technique to the
"Villanelle Charge," it is necessary to relate the
challenges presented by villanelles. Of the villanelle McFarland
has said ...the form is not so much a trick as
a challenge. ....while it is indeed easy to write a villanelle,
it is not so easy to write a good villanelle...a good
villanelle...results from a a fortunate fusion of content and
form (McFarland, 1987, p. ix). The need for slant or
near rhyme and for eye rhyme has opened the form considerably for
poets writing in English. The poet writing in English is severely
challenged by the requisite seven a and six
b rhyming words. ...Two lines ultimately a couplet
that must function as a unit, will be repeated four times each
within a span (usually) of just nineteen lines. ...The redundancy
must either be concealed somehow, or must be made to appear
necessary (McFarland, p. 45).
In analyzing the "Villanelle Charge" to determine if
Yeats may have written it, the first striking point is that the
"Villanelle Charge" was sent to me as a prose piece.
Those who had been memorizing it did not know it was a poem. I
discovered it was a poem by following my instinct that it sound
very poetical to structure it as a poem, analyze the feet and
meter, and then searching for and finding a poetry form that
matched the structure of five tercets followed by a couplet which
I had set up. Since one hallmark of Yeatss poetry is that
his syntax is as straightforward as that of good
prose (Rosenthal p. xviii) the fact that I had been given
the fragment as a prose piece is suggestive of Yeatss hand.
Next, Yeats poetry typically makes use of tradition folk forms of
ballads and songs (Rosenthal p. xvii). Indeed Yeats was always
happy to say from whom he attributed the source of his poems:
In 1904 Yeats claimed that The words and and the air
of Theres Broth in the Pot were taken down from
an old woman known as Cracked Mary... (Finneran, p.
188). The villanelle was originally an old Italian dance and song
and so this too matches with Yeatss predilications for
sources. What would be more appropriate than writing a poem about
a Pagan Goddess than using a Country dance, gig, roundleay,
song...such as Country wenches sing ?
Since Yeats is well known for basing some of his poems on extant
songs and ballads (Finnerman, 1983/1990, pp. 185-194) it is time
to compare the "Villanelle Charge" with those pieces
that most resemble it: Lelands full moon ritual from The
Gospel of Aradia; Gerald Gardners
Charge of the Goddess; and Crowleys section I,58 of the Book
of the Law.
From Leland:
Once in the month, and when the moon is
full,
Ye shall assemble in some desert place,
Or in a forest all together join
To adore the potent spirit of your queen,
My mother, great Diana. She who fain
From "The Villanelle Charge"
Once in the month, and better it be
When the moon is full, meet me
...in some secret place
The first line is very close to the "Villanelle
Charge"; the second line is similar to the third line of the
first tercet of the "Villanelle Charge"; and the fourth
and fifth lines reflect the meaning of the "Villanelle
Charge"s second tercet. (Diana is the Goddess of the
Moon.) The only problem with determining this as a source for the
"Villanelle Charge" is that it came out in 1899, a year
after Henley published his villanelle A dainty
Things (McFarland, personal communication) that says
And if you wish to flute a spell,/Or ask a meeting
neath the lime which is certainly a reference to
magic and then saysYou must not ask of it the swell/Of
organs grandiose and sublime-- The Leland poem bears no
relation to the villanelle form, so why Henleys injunction
against a villanelle being used for important worship?
The next recorded form of the Charge of the Goddess is Gerald
Gardners(Kelly, )which has this passage which is almost
verbatim of the "Villanelle Charge"s third and
fourth tercets:
For I am a gracsous Goddess. I give
unimaginable joys, on earth certainty, not faith while in life!
And upon death unutterable, rest, and ecstacy, nor do I demand
aught in sacrife'
However, this passage is taken from the infamous Aleister Crowley
(Crowley, 1938/1996) section I, 58 of The
Book of the Law:
I give unimaginable joys on earth:
certainty, not faith, while in life, upon death; peace
unutterable, rest, ecstasy; nor do I demand aught in sacrifice.
From "The Villanelle Charge" starting with the last
line of the second tercet:
For I am a gracious Goddess
I give joy on earth, certainty
Not faith while in life, and upon death
Peace, unutterable rest.
....ectasy
{Nor do} I demand aught in sacrifice,
Now here is a real puzzle. Gardner did meet Crowley in 1946 and
then again during May 1947 (Hutton, pp. 216 & 221) the year
Crowley died. Therefore, Gardner probably did take the passage
from Crowley, but why does Gardners version contain the
refrain of For I am a gracious Goddess exactly as the
"Villanelle Charge" has it while Crowleys does
not? Arrestingly, Gardner does set the Crowley passage in
quotation marks, but not the "For I am a gracious
Goddess" segment which would mean Gardner did not quote that
segment from Crowley. How then did this passage that is almost
verbatum in Gardener come to be part of the Charge fragment? I
theorized that it was actually part of Golden Dawn secrets and
that Crowely stole it from the Golden Dawn as he had stolen other
secrets from them (Hutchinson, p. 119). What must be kept in mind
with looking at these sources is that Leland's Aradia
was published eleven years after the
"Villanelle Charge" was probably first written;
Crowley's The Book of the Law
was not published until a year before Yeats died; and Gardner's
Charge was not written until after Yeats's death. This suggests
that Yeats's source for the subject of the "Villanelle
Charge" was something other than Crowley, Leland, or, of
course, Gardner.
Besides Yeats's poetry having the conversational flow of prose
and tending to be based upon songs and other old sources, Yeats,
according to Rosenthal (p. xxviii) can make a slight
distortion or variation--an off-rhyme or grammatical
ambiguity--count for a great deal. This statement reflects
what McFarland (p. 45) says is essential to making a good
villanelle, the redundancy must either be concealed
somehow, or must be made to appear necessary. Are there any
off-rhymes or grammatical ambiguities that either conceal the
strict rhyme scheme or appear to make the rhyme necessary?
In the villanelle form, the first line of the first tercet and
the third line of the first tercet are the lines that must be
repeated and form a couplet at the end of the poem. Although only
one line in the "Villanelle Charge" clearly repeats,
and that line is For I am a Gracious Goddess, it does
not exist in the first tercet. However, upon examination the word
Goddess is rhyming with the word place
which is the last word of the third line of the first tercet. A
disguised rhyme in the form of an off-rhyme is sneakily set in
the first tercet. The villanelle form requires that two, not just
one line repeat from the first tercet, and that line must be the
poems first line. Well, the last word of the first line is
be and this follows the rhyme scheme with
Me, line four, and ty on
certainty line seven. The tenth line of the poem I
had felt was incorrectly passed on to me, and when I analyzed the
form I saw the word ecstasy was in the wrong spot;
moving ectasy to the end of the line fits the
villanelle form correctly. I had also felt the piece was
unfinished, and again, looking at the requirements of the
villanelle form, I saw that the second to last line must end in a
word that rhymes with be and that the last missing
line must be For I am a gracious Goddess. Also the
assonance formed by the word rest in line nine is a
case of the strict rhyme scheme being craftily softened while the
questionable grammar of the line slows the poem to bring to a
rest on the word rest. That sort of handling of form
to emphasize meaning is the hallmark of Somebody Who Knows What
He Is Doing, in other words, a master poet.
The rhyme scheme in the fifth tercet is thrown away completely
and yet the rhythm is so carefully kept that tercet fairly
bounces along. The rhyme scheme is abandoned in the fifth tercet
for language I would characterize as candor, directness,
and something like the flavor of conversational speech as
Rosenthal would say (p. xxxii) but also abadoned to point up the
concepts that the religion of Wicca or Witchcraft shares with
Yeats, the worship of erotic love and the
"conviction of a sexual principle at the heart of all
existance. Amusingly, rhythm is a salient characteristic of
erotic love and sexual principle, and bouncing, happy rhythm is
kept in Love and mirth are my rituals/For I am the
beginning and the end while structure rhyme has been
stripped away. If we see the lines as a couple happily bouncing
away, there is further meaning in the line if we consider that
sex is in one sense a beginning, a beginning of a new life, and
in another an end, as orgasm is considered in English a climax (a
type of finish) and called by the French the little
death. The two lines bounces us naturally into the third
lines statement about reincarnation.
The "Villanelle Charge"s fifteenth line stating
the Goddess is the circle of rebirth is wholly in
keeping with Yeatss symbolism of the moon and his
understanding of the deity. According to A. G. Stock, (1964, p.
123) in Yeatss symbolism the moon governs human life
and the nights of a lunar month stand for the successive
incarnations. A Vision
amounts to a summing-up of Yeats [sic] own sense of values
in a system of thought about the soul in and beyond life...
(Stock, p. 122) and in A Vision (Yeats,
1937/1938) the workings of incarnations are referred to repeated
as The Great Wheel (Yeats, p. 67) spheres (Yeats, p.
187), cycles (p. 243). Further Yeats (p. 67) opens Book I: The
Great Wheel of A Vision
with quotations from Empedocles, Burnet , and Heraclitus to
define God as circle revolving from discord to concord and back
again for all time.
The final quatrain in interesting on two counts. First, the meter
is slightly jarred away from the bouncing regularity of the
preceding tercet. Second, the first two lines of the quatrain do
not follow the established rhyme scheme, and yet they do form a
couplet as each pair of lines in the quatrain is supposed to per
Passerats villanelle form. This is yet another distortion
of the form, but it is a distortion that helps to focus the
content of the poem. The basics of the meter and rhyme are
followed but distorted in such a way to emphasis the import these
simple words have. Yeats typically was able to make a
slight distortion or variation...count for a great deal
(Rosenthal, p. xviii) and so this first couplet of the finishing
quatrain suggests his hand.
It is to be noted that Yeats poetry, even in its earliest forms,
is incantatory (Rosenthal p. xxxii) and this is
exactly what "The Villanelle Charge" is; it is an
incantation.
Two questions might properly be brought forward at this point
regarding my argument that Yeats composed the "Villanelle
Charge" that was given to me in a fragmented form. The first
is: why would the poem come to me in a fragmented form with
no-one knowing it was by Yeats? The Golden Dawn was a secret
society and Yeats gave away no secrets of the Order
(Raine, p. 246). Next, it is possible that Yeats may have
intended for the poem to be memorized. It is even possible he
never wrote it down to keep it secret, and he passed it on orally
as in the old Celtic Bardic tradition and is a tradition in
Wicca. The fragment, as I was given it, had been passed along by
people who had memorized it and handed it on as a piece to be
memorized piece. As a actress who is a bad study
(meaning memorization is an ordeal for me) I can attest the
"Villanelle Charge" is really easy to memorize. Those
that I know about who handed the poem on to me have no real
education in poetry and so it is not surprising they did not
realize they were passing along a poem. Hallmarks of Yeatss
style are after all, prosiness and conversationalness (Rosenthal,
p. xviii). That it came to me in fragmented form is not
surprising when it is considered that Americans of our era are
not of an oral tradition; we are used to referring to books, the
written word, and so the intellectual skill of memorization is
not as firmly mastered as it was in oral tradition societies or
even societies that feel memorization goes hand in hand with book
learning. Americans memorize nothing beyond the alphabet and
maybe the multiplication tables, and so my experience in a London
school where we were given sentences from Jane Austin to memorize
to use in the written yearly State examination allows me to
appreciate that memorization is an intellectual skill attended to
in Europe but not fostered in the USA. My husband who spent part
of his childhood in Spain as well as in many Latin American
countries can rattle off all sorts of lists of facts that he was
required to commit to memory as a child. Another reason why the
poem would not be likely to be remembered completely is that the
Charge of the Goddess is delivered (that is theater lingo for
giving the speech) by a woman, and the person who is the extent
to which I can trace this poem back is a man. He memorized it as
some male witches like to do for various and excellent , obvious
reasons, but when it came time to pass it on, years after he had
learned it, he could not remember it all. He was hypnotized with
more being extracted from him in that manner. All of this
considered, is it any wonder the piece came to me incomplete?
The second question is: have any other long lost
poems attributed to Yeats ever surfaced? Yes, indeed there have.
According to Richard Finneran (1983/1990, p. 176-184)
Michael O hAodha has suggested that eleven poems signed
with the initial Y. in the Dublin periodical Hibernia
from April 1882 to July 1883 might be the work of W.
B. Yeats. Finneran presents evidence pro and con regarding
the poems being Yeatss, but shies away arguing on the basis
of the poems content, themes, and style because such
arguments must always be subjective... and so he presents
all eleven poems for the individual readers to weigh the
evidence and to reach their own conclusions.
I have now given all my reasons why I believe the
"Villanelle Charge" was initially composed by Yeats
along with my speculations as to what the history of the possible
sources was. What remains to be done now is to give the poem that
spanned more than a century in its composition and unites two
millennium.
If you have comments or questions do e-mail me with them.
"The Villanelle Charge" copyright 2000 Cynthia Joyce Clay all rights reserved